Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Krista Ramsey Introduction Activity

http://www.cincinnati.com/story/opinion/columnists/krista-ramsey/2014/02/15/krista-locking-into-the-magic-of-legos/5521245/
This column is about how Legos affect children's lives and parents lives and why might parents spend so much on Legos for their children.
I'm going to look at a quote from the column that I think is the best written.
"Then feet will pad up the basement stairs to show parents what's been created. And they'll pad right back down to tear it apart and move on to freestyle. This is where a lot of good brain work happens. Although this should never be shared with children, fiddling with bricks improves spatial reasoning and 3D visualization. It also builds a child's confidence in his own creativity – the notion that if you try something a couple dozen ways, sooner or later something cool will result."
The impact of this really made me think that Legos aren't just a kids toy they actually help develop the kids learning and lots of other things and that it is more than what the kid might think, and that may be the reason why parents buy kids so many Legos. The diction mostly used in this quote is informal because it is like the author is actually speaking to you. And the syntax used there are a lot of short sentences, that have a great impact on how you read the column.
I think Ramsey’s writing style is quite ornate because she gets you to see what is going on with the certain details she puts into the text one example is "Some sit cross-legged on the floor, doing homework. Some talk quietly to a friend or have a snack. Others check their mothers' watches somewhat compulsively. Many have been waiting with their parents for as long as two hours."
This gets you to see all these kids doing all the different things. 
If  I was given the opportunity some questions I would ask her would be 
1: how do you come up with the different ideas?
2: why do you write the way you do?
3: how did you begin your career in writing?


Sunday, April 6, 2014

Future predictions

So in the pages I have been reading this past week. Theo has been asked by his friend Julio for advice on the Duffy case because he may hold valuable information for the case. Well as I mentioned in my last post so far there have been no witnesses to the murder of mrs Duffy, well Julio has told Theo that he may know of one but the problem with the witness is that. He is from El Salvador and he has come into America illegally so that he can support his family in El Salvador from America and he has been working at the golf course where the Duffy house is. "You see he was working in the day of the murder. He was eating lunch. His lunch break starts at eleven thirty and goes till twelve.he saw a Man jump into a golf cart and go right down to the Duffy house go inside the back door and then come back out a few minuets later, and go quickly back up to the course" so the interesting part about this is that this man was in the house around the time mrs Duffy was expected to be murdered. But then it goes on to say the man from El Salvador saw the Duffy case on the tv and saw Mr Duffy and said that is the man he saw. So usually you would go in and testify as an eye witness but the man from El Salvador is too afraid of being deported if he goes to the authorites.

So I predict that because of what kind of a position Theo is in  he will take the man to the judge because he knows the judge and both his parents are lawyers so he will take him to act as an eye witness for the case.