The best thing about my book so far is the way it is written it is very descriptive and I like that because it really gives you a real spence of the peoples attitude and what everything looked like. One example is "he walked through them with a polite "excuse me" and a metallic smile, he really had no fear because the men wouldn't bother a kid." I really like this one because you can really see this kid walking through this big gang of "rough-looking men" and just politely saying "excuse me".
Another line I liked was "the foul smell of stale booze hung in the air" I like this one because you can almost smell the stale alchahol on the people in the ally way.
There are many many more and I am sure I will be finding so many more throughout reading this book so be prepared because you may see this prompt repeated later as I get farther into the book
I like when books are descriptive also. It makes the book more enjoyable to read.
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